Blankyboi19's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Quick Dodge]

You have so much potential. The animation is smooth, the art style is adorable, problem is the gameplay just blows.
I see you have talent, but use it for something greater than this.

I know you can do it.

jovannyrodz responds:

Did you see this one? https://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/792282

[A young Dragon's (Text) Adventure]

This has potential! It really does.
I think it requires a nice deal of updates with a few things: the text font is just not very fitting. It would be nice to have a softer, my fantasy-esque font, if you get my drift; and maybe some sound effect to really get you in the mood and add some excitement - I'm not saying you need a full-blown soundtrack, but a little something to listen to would be nice.

There are a few subtle grammatical errors in the text, which is of course expected. Things like the word "founded" instead of "found," but that's minor stuff someone else could help out with when polishing the game.

I like the illustrations, by the way. Simple and cute.

MoonbowDragon responds:

Thank you so much for both your criticism and pointing out how this could be better. This is the kind of critique I really appreciate! As I learn to make more games, I'll keep in mind what you said when I come back to this text adventure to improve it. ❤
As for sound, I don't know how to make music and add it to Unity(I'm taking Udemy lessons), but hopefully in a future I can learn how to do so and make it sound nicer.

I'm glad you like the art.

[Grab The Crown]

I'm sorry, but it seems that I can't start the game. When I first opened the game I could only really access full screen mode and nothing else; then when I refreshed the site, not even full screen works. It's basically just music.
I won't give you a bad rating, since there is really nothing to rate, but I really would like to know why this is happening.
I'm using Chrome, if you need to know.

I like the music, though!

Oh, thanks, man! The game is actually scary/exciting for me in a way, I dunno why. Really cool!

Zoey-21 responds:

Sorry about that for some reason it wasn't like that in the preview.
I have re-uploaded the game and had some friends test it and the buttons should be working now

[Puzzle Frog]

I really thought it was fun to play!

I wanna point out that from an aesthetic point of view, the different art styles and different sizes of the objects (the frog currently has more pixels that are smaller, and walls have less pixels that are bigger) was unpleasing to the eye. I think the frog and door having larger pixels - while still being legible objects, of course - would look awesome and fit the general feel of the game; but that's just what I think.
If it were more consistent, I would be super happy!

You probably saw this coming, but I would love more levels. I want to really feel them get more difficult as I keep playing.

Speaking of aesthetics, do you think it's possible to make the animation of the frog running just a little bit smoother? You don't have to, but seeing as that being one of the few things that actually move, it would add a lot. '
But hey! The animation that the red fountain had was really neat! You could try something like that!
Just wanted to point that out. No need to, if you don't want to :)
I only now just noticed that the yellow key is the only 3D thing in the game; that doesn't really show consistency either. Maybe make it more simple and 2D instead?

This is just me making up stuff, but what would you think about having more enemies in future levels? It really adds to the excitement having to run away from those! I would love seeing more foes in future levels.

The levels were a lot of fun to play. You're pretty good at making each puzzle different from the last. I just needed to say that, so you know that I do enjoy playing the game very much.

I really hope I don't seem harsh here! The reason I'm so critical is that I really like this game and I want to see it live up to its full potential. With more levels you could even get a small story line as to why the frog is stuck where it is.

Thank you for this experience!

aleee2203 responds:

I really appreciate that you liked the game and that you took the time to write your opinion.

Not all the art of the game is made by me, only a part, there is a combination of different art that is free online. I made this decision for reasons of time and money, since I am the only person working on this project.

About the animation of the frog, during development I was faced with the dilemma whether to make the movement of the frog more realistic or to have more precision in the movement, and since in the game you have to dodge holes and move boxes with certain precision, I decided to go for the precision.

I would very much like to finish the game with more levels and a little story as you mention, but for time and money reasons, only if this game gets a lot of attention.

I really liked your criticism, it helps me improve my work. Thank you so much.

[Bizarre Bosses]

Wonderful concept!
I would really love it, if you worked with someone else to maybe improve upon the graphics and animations - the frame rate isn't all that good. The character is also super cute, but again, working working together with someone who specializes, or is just in general better suited to make smooth animations and draw more detailed characters would be great.
I really do wish the bosses got more difficult to kill after you've depleted half of their health, as that would add to the challenge. Once you've figured out their weaknesses, then it's a bit too easy.
The voiceover also sounds super cool, if I may say so myself.
Otherwise, super great concept, but maybe needs a bit more time and work put into it.

I really don't mean any offence or want to hurt you in any way - you have made something really cool here. This is just what I think. I'm sorry, man. I would definitely play this again, if some things were polished and there was more gameplay. Maybe some updates will do the trick :)
Thank you, still. It was nice playing this!

Arvie-k responds:

Alright I appreciate the feedback. I'm actually thinking of updating the game and I agree that the bosses can be easy at times.I'll most likely will add that when they're at half health they get a little harder it wouldn't be to hard to implement. I appreciate your feedback, thanks for playing the game :).

[Untitled Game Demo]

Please update this more! It's really funny.

SexyBootlegFish responds:

Thank you!

[Graciel's Guide to Human Love]

I would love to play the finished game. I hope you guys come out with updates soon!

Supernova-Games responds:

thanks! I'll post a new update soon here on newgrounds :D

[BombIT]

The music is kind of fun and the visuals aren't all too horrible, but you really need to give me some instructions. I had trouble trying to figure out what the controls were since, again, there are no clear indications of what you are supposed to do.
The controls are also a little messy; the guy can walk one way when I lead him the other, which is insanely frustrating. It is however possible that I'm the one who's just bad at playing, but I still feel annoyed. It's not really worth playing at the moment. I would like you to work on this a little longer. I see the potential, but the language barrier is what really takes it away from me. An English option would be greatly appreciated, thank you.
I don't mean to offend, this is just what I think.
I'm sorry for being harsh.

tburotto responds:

Thanks for the comment! This was done for a course here in Chile, that is why it is in spanish. I'll improve it in the course of the week, again thanks for your review.

[Protect The Fruit]

The music is really fun, but damn is it hard to aim! The game also doesn't seem to fit my screen, meaning I had to reduce the size of the page to 80%; it's a bummer. I can't really survive for more than 5-15 seconds, so I might not have seen enough if what the game has to offer, but I can't seem to understand what the function of the "rewind time" thing is.
The graphics and the overall look of the game are very nice, but that doesn't make up for the fact that I can't have fun playing it.
I'm sorry.

DOFAT-Game responds:

Very helpful feedback , thank you!!